Click, fizz, shwish
The beer opens.
RELAXation.
The park was conquered.
The dinner cooked and cherished.
The bath done.
The milk given.
It's Monday night
and 7:30 pm
and
we are all
ZONKED!
#sliceoflife #SOL18 #TWTblog
The beer opens.
RELAXation.
The park was conquered.
The dinner cooked and cherished.
The bath done.
The milk given.
It's Monday night
and 7:30 pm
and
we are all
ZONKED!
#sliceoflife #SOL18 #TWTblog
Great word - ZONKED! You can hear the rhythm in this one word. Great closing to your poem!
ReplyDeleteI think Daylight Savings Time has caught up with all of us! Loved the poem!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great poem! That ending line has such a sense of finality to it and a feeling I can relate to all too well.
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